My blood was once red and
now is black. There is something
I lost that will not come back….
my wind is dying and no one
is crying........so I feel nothing.
The clouds will not part my world
is crumbling. I cannot here the rumbling
my light is gone and I’m so alone
nothing can compare to the shadow
that covers my world
the eternity of my life is
ending soon sorry I cannot see
the face of the moon.....

yay first comment ... another beautiful poem^^

*sigh* angel a true friend and fan!!!!

if only there weren't so many misspelled words, i'd say that the poem's quite ok.

Better? I modified it so there arn't any now...........

Your poetry is very good...It has a kind of darkness to it.....I like it...

Would it be okay if I added some of my poetry?

Well....

See Ya!! (^ _ ^)

sure go ahead

ive got a poem but its not finished can i put it on here wheb it is plz

love that poem it moved me dont no how but it did

Poem is super,I like it!!!!!I hope you will make another poem in the future!)))))))))))